Black Poetry : Vile-lentz

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Mar 28, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is it a violent act if I profess to you my love
    and you don't in return...leaving my needs
    unmet...na-gleck-ID...and even if I can't
    spell...I can hurt...waiting for you
    to rain words I want to be
    wet with.................................is it violent
    if YOu don't Love me? But have
    painted this pick c(her) that I interpret
    as a LOVE i've been looking for?

    Is this a domestic or foreign affair?
    a situation?
    It's unclear to me as you seem to be
    speaking a foreign tongue of silence
    and if I interpret this silence as something
    I never wanted to hear would it be
    violent if I pained by myself?

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well just do that perfected vibe **** why don't ya Blakman!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. Rashad

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    Well ****!!

    Done only the way it can!!
    Tyte Scribe!
    I get da pick c(her)! Tyte!
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must say, you are most clever in your presentation. Wise compositional construction. I got you in my sights, no doubt. Peace.
     
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    needless to say how tyte this was.

    nfinite
    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya off da hook and lovely bringing it on .........tyght scribe u vibe
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Royal BLaK-NeSs.


    sometimes i wonder if... well... nevamind! :D

    i'll just say... it's always a pleasure to experience
    your scribes.

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fam,

    thank you

    blak
     
  9. wildflower7

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    that's my favorite line...
    you flow pain like no one else...
    -7:spinstar:
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    nice question
    and i believe
    it's domestic to me
    break out them dogs man
    and search for that love
    feeling the poet
     
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