Black Poetry : View From Beneath

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, May 22, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honey chocolate thighs straddling my chest
    I look up to your lovely face
    This is the way I love you best

    I lay in wonder as you take control
    Finding your groove in a rhythmic roll
    Your arms behind you, then over your head
    Reaching for the sky as we bounce on our bed
    Up and down, round and round
    I can feel where you put me
    When it’s that spot you’ve found

    I see in your eyes
    You like it like that
    When you grab my ankles
    And lean all the way back
    I see the wetness gathered in your nest
    I see your mouth water
    As I caress your breast

    How beautiful you are
    Making sure I hit the roof
    Impaling yourself deeply
    Finding womanly truth

    Looking up at you
    I’m happy as can be
    I love what we’re doing
    I love what I see

    You make a thousand faces
    Each one telling a different story
    A story of happiness and inner pleasure
    As you ride my love to screaming glory

    BE
    © 2001
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My, my , my ,my,my!

    Erotic, very sensual and erotic! You know if you ever get tired of what you really do there is work out there for you:D just kidding!
    I enjoyed the imagery...."Now somebody...please turn on the A/C!!":hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :eeek:
    Blessings on your passioned filled House!
     
  3. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "impaling yourself deeply" (body and soul)..getting lost in each other...beautiful love scene BE....

    K
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    have mer-say! :wink:

    Alyce
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lawd , Lawd, Lawd Have mercy !

    hold up wait.....let me go get some water
    ............ :hot:
     
  6. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *catching my breath*

    Shade
     
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