Black Poetry : View From Beneath (a 96 degrees repost)

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honey chocolate thighs stradling my chest
    I look up to your lovely face
    This is the way I love you best

    I lay in wonder as you take control
    Finding your groove in a rhythnic roll
    Your arms behind you, then over your head
    Reaching for the sky as we bounce on our bed
    Up and down, round and round
    I can feel where you put me
    When it's that spot you've found

    I see in your eyes
    You like it like that
    When you grab my ankles
    And lean all the way back
    I can see the wetness gathered in your nest
    I see your mouth water
    As I caress your breast

    How beautiful you are
    Making sure I hit the roof
    Impaling yourself deeply
    Finding womanly truth

    Looking up at you
    I'm happy as can be
    I love what we're doing
    I love what I see

    You make a thousand faces
    Each one telling a different story
    A story of happiness and inner pleasure
    As you ride my love to screaming glory

    It is so F*!%$#@ HOT I can't stand it

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can you say

    115 Fahrenheit in the shade, my brutha?

    and I ain't even beGUN to comment on THIS piece!

    a
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:

    OMG !!!!

    see now this is what I am talking about !

    Pure unadulturated pleasure !


    ride em cowboy !:D
     
  4. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    trynna

    shut my mouf!!!!! DAYYYYUUUMMMMMMMM BE!!!!!!!

    you's on fire wit dis one mayne


    thank you for tha view!

    mojo
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!

    ...I think a shower is, just, the right touch for the aftermath of this piece...
    :uzi::hot::roll:
     
  6. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sorry!!!

    But my thermostat just bust. whew...can somebody get me a cold wet towel..I need some ice. I saw...i was interested..but scared to come in. Now you got me leaving all hot and bothered. This is dha bomb!!!!
     
  7. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    you know I like it when you go here....


    this is extremely vivid, brotha! OUCH!!!!!! :) :) :)

    T
     
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