Black Poetry : Video HOs (A Poem-entary)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1milehi, Apr 12, 2004.

  1. 1milehi

    1milehi Banned MEMBER

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    Lights, camera, action!
    Mic check, 1 - 2, 1 - 2
    Here we go -yo!
    Here we go -yo!
    Can ya feel it?
    Can ya dig the flow?
    Do you see it
    it’s a video HO!
    In the camera
    shaking ***
    shake it-shake it
    like a salt SHAka
    break it down
    break it - break it

    Her back side’s vibratin’
    in the camera lens
    on a table or on top
    of a Mercedes Benz
    Black sista
    butt naked
    swingin’ from a pole
    this is what she’s wanted
    from 6 years old
    to be a super star
    some way, some how
    even if the process
    creates a clown
    reducing herself
    to sex object status
    but ballas in the industry
    think she’s the baddest
    not because of her mind
    but what she does
    with her behind

    She’s a video HO
    shaking ***
    shake it-shake it
    like a salt SHAka
    break it down
    break it - break it

    How much do you drink
    before you do your thing?
    Or do you snort or shoot up
    to set your mind free
    to do what you do
    screw who you screw
    shake what you shake and
    all the while be a
    FAKE
    *** sista
    selling her soul
    just to show the whole world
    she’s a video HO
    in the camera
    shaking ***
    shake it-shake it
    like a salt SHAka
    break it down
    break it - break it

    Feeling the rhymes
    feeling the times
    is it possible
    to show what you can
    do with your
    MIND?
    Have a positive affect
    around the whole world
    something to share
    with young boys and girls
    who need ROLE models
    not models who
    ROLL
    that tootsie
    that booty
    slinging round a pole

    All y’all need to sit
    your butts down
    at the feet
    of Black queens
    who can show you how
    to elevate your mind
    cover up your behind
    carry yourself with class
    instead of
    backing it up
    in the camera
    shaking
    ***
    shake it-shake it
    like a salt SHAka
    break it down
    break it - break it

    Can ya feel it?
    Can ya dig the flow?
    Do you see it
    all you video HOs?
    Sistas we are
    this I can’t deny
    but why don't you reveal
    the beauty of your
    MIND
    not the size and shape
    of your
    BLACK BEHIND
    in the camera
    shaking ***
    shake it-shake it
    like a salt SHAka
    break it down
    break it - break it
    Break it
    Break It
    Break IT
    BREAK IT
    DOWN!

    2004
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spin: woah got my head spinnin :deal: this is hot :wink: :uzi:
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ^5 TO THIS

    ...DISPLAY OF

    INFINITE CONSCIOUSNESS...

    I'M FEELING IT...ON THE REAL...
     
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    You broke this down, some don't see just an isolated gurl shakin, they see every black female up there, mindlessly movin. Liked the way you posed this.
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this really does say somfin...its a **** shame what the world is coming too...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    tru dat...
    getting paid off da feminine phat....
    tyte piece son...

    this chics aint even trying to be smart....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte ride on da rodeo!
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome from above as i bless dis scribe some love
    happy u join us in motion very nice drop
     
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    And it's been said...

    Feelin' this.
     
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    :wave: welcome
    tight drop
    hope to read more of ya
    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. 1milehi

    1milehi Banned MEMBER

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    i'm glad you all were feelin' the flow (even though as i re-read it i see it still needs some fine tuning.)

    thanks for the love everyone!
     
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