Black Poetry : Video Girl (Revisited and Reworded)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Amun-Ra, Dec 10, 2002.

  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Video Girl

    Rump thumpin’
    coochie bumpin’,
    if you knew what was in my mind!
    Video girls,
    with yo’ sweet brown pearls,
    I channel change to seek and find
    you unzipped to the navel,
    drippin’ sweet caramel flava,
    licorice legs and a big behind.
    Swingin’ yo’ hips,
    showing vertical lips,
    Lawd, I hope I don’t go blind!
    Video girl,
    come rock my world,
    let me fill your hot gold mine.
     
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    great flow poet!!
     
  3. Bishop

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    RA!! I am feeling you on this....Man I clicking past BET and almost had a heart attack at all the gorgeous flesh that was calling my name!!!!!!
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** shame

    it's a **** shame to want all that flesh--but it's there in front of me--so why shouldn't I want it--Ra

    :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i was checking it out and my heart jump like my drive
    all dat indeed i wanted something!!!
     
  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hate to be --

    --so typically male, but ****--I ain't blind and I want it all--NOW!

    RA

    :D
     
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    I'm with you bruh!!! I WANT IT TOO!!!!!!
     
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    nice poem..but i'm gonna use your words to comment on its subject matter ..."typically male"

    nice flow tho ;)
     
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    yeah yeah-thats whut im talkin about..
    sic flow man...
     
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    re: video girl

    sex sells... nice flow... :kiss:
     
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