Black Poetry : victory

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Victory

    Thank You

    As I write my last lines
    It’s Room Time

    Cuz I trying to be in the throne with Jesus
    One the side singin when a soul gets saved
    Nobody said I have to be weak and afraid
    Got to be brave
    When coppas want to misbehave
    I’m am the modern day slave

    Working, making so many k a year
    But what I done for the community
    I’m a balla
    Diplomatic immunity
    What I get what I see, what if I flee
    And tell the ghetto how it be

    Tell the ghetto is they fault
    They in the position they end
    Sometimes a crack head justs needed a friend
    Whoever pass judgment thinks the least
    This is hell down here, but who is man, who is beast
    Who is diseased?

    Still in slavery, the spirit on its knees
    Begging to be released
    May God have grace, protect a boy
    When he picks up a gun, a pipe
    WE ain’t there yet, this is life
    If we could reach our capacity
    We could walk rivers with enough faith

    This is rhapsody
    What if this word was the last u read
    That crumb was the last thing you were fed
    Where you be if you died
    If you know you lived life like most


    Who would be your host?
    What is your purpose?
    Don’t look at me
    I can’t tell you
    But can you tell me

    Copyright Daniel Davis 2004
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, this hits with magnum force, spokesman. Tight flow.
     
  3. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    funny u said magnum
    book im writing
    roomtime da magno theory

    thanks gempis
    so much luv 4 u
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the one there is true victory, speak on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte deep scribe it really hit wit a bang !!
     
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