Black Poetry : Victimize

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'm da prey again
    inside the walls of sin
    that has taken me in

    Too deep to let go
    even deeper to stay
    victimize by fate

    I've been chain by her love
    shackled inside her depth
    cuffed on the notions

    Striped by reality
    da truth of pain
    and lost inside the game

    I was taken by da smile
    beaten by the bliss
    stolen on rapture

    Now jailed in this chamber
    of lost and not found
    inside a keyless conviction

    Guilty by words spoken
    beyond a fair chance
    i knew this was premaditated

    Shot down wit one blast
    yet fighting to make it last
    my love was trashed

    Now a victim of what was
    could never be and shouldn't
    happen day by day no bail

    Lost under da spell
    not free , judged
    and locked away victimized


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    heartfelt poet

    feeling the angle

    especially when one is just trying to do the right thing
     
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    Hi $$RICH$$
    Getting caught
    caught again, letting something happen
    That leads to a long story with a crazy ending
    before there is a beginning.
    Without bail.
    How deep it can get.
    So sad.
    Wonderful drop my brother
    I will be
    Swimming to shore, toward the mountain
    to feel the wind. And walk on dry land.
    Trying to make bail

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    That was deep Rich!
     
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    man so'ja u know how it can swing at times but my bond is set !

    Bluewater u know when u caught up in the mix of misguided feelings and
    stumble into a mass of hurt whewwwwww!!!

    And it gets deeper Hopelis on the bamks of morrow ....

    Thanks family for reading me on this .
     
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