Black Poetry : Victim of yo Hustle (clean version)

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  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading while it was posted
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang, this was mad deep. I'm totally feeling this. It kinda reminds me of some of the stuff I be writting. I can relate and I can totally put some faces to this script as well who were victims of their own hustles....me included. Much love poet for spreading this deep and thought provoking hood knowledge.
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo krazelyricks thank you for checkin out this piece it truly means alot to me

    sweettee, love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Very heavy and real from da street hood victim of da hustle
    i've seen it all happen and know this piece speak truth this
    was mad tyte and live sis u took it there fo real.....................
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU $$RICH$$ I FELT THE NEED TO PUT IT OUT THERE


    SWEETTEE, LOVE
     
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    Names changes,
    Time changes...
    but the GAME stays the same!
    How long do we stay in a game that never changes?
    The "GAME of DEATH"
    Cause in the end...even the PLAYER gets played!

    Wonderful write up Sis, I surely feel and share your concern ...yet pain.
     
  7. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YES! Sistah Queen I am so glad that you caught my message, this is defintately the GAME OF DEATH. Thank you for checkin out this flo.

    Sweettee, love
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    A timely messag to those who wanna test tthe game.....you get got one way or the other......

    great drop, sweettee...i liked how you kept it street....
    the other site probably didnt want that real flava you dropped.....glad you brought it here to share with us.....
     
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    This piece brings to life the trappings of life many get caught up in. Much respect I really like way you described things it brought the work to life.
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    abstract219 and amin thanks for checking out this flo, I am very glad you felt it, this is one of my favorites

    sweettee, love
     
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