Black Poetry : Victim of the Falling Rain

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Victim Of The Falling Rain

    I've shivered
    I've pained
    from your frosty tears.
    I still hear your cries
    Like music in the air.
    I've dreamt of your eyes
    and your seductive stares.
    I put to question the reason
    for my pain.
    Why do I always love what
    I can not obtain?
    I've grown ambivalent
    to your silly little games.
    I ache at the thought
    of being a victim of the falling rain.
    Although I long to see the rain
    the dewdrops of your eyes
    the mistiness within our days
    the sorrow of your cries
    I hear tears on your lips,
    I feel pain inside my eyes
    And I am now a
    victim of the falling rain.


    Nah'shon-Rae 10/89
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nahshon, your poetry is quite refreshing this morning, within this rain of love poetry you submit. Beautiful piece.
     
  3. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you angelicsage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was so beautifully posed
    my brutha ya pen is mighty
     
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