Black Poetry : VI

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    freedom part VI

    freedom
    wat is it
    r we free....
    cuz if we were...
    my words would be ...
    are they... are my words free?
    huh.. cuz i aint
    free if my words r limited to my actions
    to ur reaction
    am i?
    if i only seem educated
    after i edited my papers
    am i?
    r my words free?
    free... if my poetry is only right
    if u like it
    if U say its tight....
    r we free yet?
    r my words free... if my speech is limited
    to ur comprehension
    free?... wats freedom?
    does it have bounds...
    r my words free.... yet?
    NOW?
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    isn't it an interesting thought...
    that free-dom is not really free
    and everything that appears to be
    ...is not

    Nice series sis!
    Keep up the good work...
    I'm loving it :toast:
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flamet: Go'head Poet! You're as free as you feel. Stay blessed
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done sista again awaiting freedom
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall again... for all the love yall never stop giving..peace
     
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    Freedom of speech, freedom of written expression...I guess when you look at it, it's only free up to a certain extent. Much food for thought poet.
     
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    Freedom
    Go ahead sista
    This was beautiful
    We are all awaiting to be free
    Much Love