Black Poetry : Vexed Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Nov 8, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See my thoughts were
    Deeply rooted
    So I rooted for them to not be deep
    I mean, I didnt wanted to share my feeling
    But wanted my emotions to be set free
    Constant struggles
    My feeling in a muzzle
    CAN ANYONE HERE ME!
    My mouth says one thing, my brain too
    but my heart doesnt feel me!
    I say things
    That dont mean
    What I say
    Ill proclaim that Im copestetic
    when things are really
    the opposite way
    I climb up
    Then relized it was down
    All days appear happy
    When most I really frown!
    Perplexing, vexing
    **** this is my life
    Dark and Cloudy
    Dont wanna die
    Often to weak to fight.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THEONE man i feel u so sometime i sit in the same visional chair
    this was tyte
     
  3. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin you man, love the write, keep doin what u do best!!!!
    :welldone:
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    boo i feel you and i meant that
     
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    Word, it's hard when you are at odds with yourself, conflicting feelings and desires. Peace to you, my friend.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a dark cloud that won't quite completely go away, this is what I thought of as I read your piece. I have been there many a time, I appreciate the way you flowed with this.
     
  7. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bingo: THNKS FOR THE LUV Fam!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this one
    dig it...
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really felt this one..... u aint alone
     
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