Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jan 17, 2005.
Real Life Reflections of Sage
what a wonderful tribute Queen, i could feel the emotion in each line. my prayers go out to you and your family. peace
Many blessings, sweet sister.
No need 2 tell U how touching this is, cuz U wrote it.
So many of ours have been destroyed but not killed.
this was so touching and outstanding a great tribute from heart
i can hear u now sista .......
The forgotten veterans, those who came back home only to be turned away, we tend to forget about them until it all touches us personally. This was heart breaking sage, I hope he has found the peace his soul has been searching for. Such an emotive write sis. I am sorry for your loss, peace to you and yours.
What a sad life to kill..death. This story broke my heart ...but all that he didn't have the pleasure of seeing and feeling, will be seen and felt through you.
We enter the world one minute, and every minute after that...we prepare for death.
Awww, girl. I am wiping the tears from my eyes and wishing so much I could hug you right now. What a beautiful tribute to the man. I feel like I can see him, you write so well. Much love and peace to you and your uncle at this time, and always. Love you, Sage.
This was a beautiful dedication sister
So true in so many ways smh
This piece/peace spoke volumes to all the pain that is rampant amongst our veterans
You did him justice sister
This was a beautiful Poem. I hope that this theme can be spread nationally so that people ignorant to the plight of a war veteran can see the pain that these people endure.
this poem is so on point...i feel every stanza like it was a piece of my own flesh...this is because my pops was over there...i still don't really understand that cat...smh...this poem made me think of that...i hope i can get to this point with him b4 it's too late....you are truly gifted sage
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