Black Poetry : Vessel -- HAIKU

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two ships slowly pass
    in the darkness of the night
    each shadows its own


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Haiku lover here

    see, i love haiku's too. ive written a few myself. this was magical, i like the way you ask the question at the end



    One
     
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    Psssst...N2....5-7-5

    haiku syllables
    lay them down five seven five
    so few words tell all

    thus it's still tight N2 (but you knew that....)

    one love,blak
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    I shoulda known a brotha
    wasn't gon'let me get by...
    and ya' know eyes thanks ya'
    for the tip...
    I'm workin' this piece
    cuttin' it up and it's like
    dizaaaaammmm...
    hard as hell!!!

    :kiss: :kiss: thank ya doll!
     
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    haiku continued

    ships pass in the dark
    two strangers in the night air
    sailing on currents

    a collision course
    a fantasy island cruise
    indigo waters
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thandiwe...

    thanks for the haiku continued
    you responded with...
    Much luv!
     
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    Diversity at it's finest!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite, nyce...i am really lovin' the haikus, fo sho!
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister~

    Thank you for readin'
    N2's Haikus!! :lol:
     
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