Black Poetry : VERTIGO! (She gave it to me)

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  1. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had a woman give me vertigo
    she was a dark skin temptress with her eyes made of stone
    we drank and danced by the light of the moon
    next thing I realized we were in her room and
    she said she knew about a voodoo way
    to make me want to stay there for the rest of my days
    she slipped her dress off and she turned around
    and when she did my feet never touched the ground

    with her touch fantastic
    and beauty so true
    pure fantasy happens
    and it could happen to you
    on one hand your thinking
    everythings fine
    but then you realize
    she's stolen a place in your mind
    then she moves
    worships your body
    swallows you whole
    and drinks of your soul

    and then I knew my mind had slipped away
    I havent seen it since that day
    it searches every single place I go
    for the girl that gave me vertigo
    so I warn you with the words I tell
    of a dark skin temptress with a magic spell
    dont get mixed up if you still have a chance
    or she might just ask you to dance

    with her touch fantastic
    and beauty so true
    pure fantasy happens
    and it could happen to you
    on one hand your thinking
    everythings fine
    but then you realize
    she's stolen a place in your mind
    then she moves
    worships your body
    swallows you whole
    and drinks of your soul

    She gives you vertigo.....


    Infrequently Soulful,
    Archival
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know so well about the Vertigo love
    this was awesome Archival...........
     
  3. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    high praise right back at you.

    High praise given right back your direction Rich.

    I see you've tasted the vertigo love so dangerously good. Having known those heights you can never settle for a lower plateau. Live at your own risk, so they say.

    Infrequently Soulful,
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    yes indeed beyond compare.
    again big ups to this piece that i can relate to so well
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my,my,my!!
    Vertigo is what we're callin' now?
    I still love it!!
     
  6. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well

    When passion takes you so high, that just looking down makes your knees week and your mind swoon, what else can you call it.

    Vertigo..... I love it too.

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    Someone has taken you by storm it seems, great description of that feeling of being swept away.
     
  8. 4EVERLUV

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    Hey Archival I want to play this joint got
    me flown' your way.:)


    I heard you been talkn’ bout me
    And the way I ravished you to ecstasy
    I guess you thought
    it couldn’t happen to you
    Caught up in my rapture
    my vertigo voodoo

    I tried to warn you
    not to look in my eyes
    but you did it anyway
    now you cant hide
    your cravin’ for me
    the way I nurture
    your manly body

    I tasted your skinned
    reeled you in
    Gave you that feeling
    you never want to end

    I thought about having
    mercy on you
    But since I know
    what that vertigo lovin’ can do
    I didn’t want to be selfish
    so I shared it with you

    Now you don’t know
    what to do
    Tryn’ to find that woman
    that put it on you
    cant eat cant sleep
    cuz all you can think

    is the dark skin temptress
    with the magic spell
    that made your manhood
    throb and swell from that
    vertigo lovin’ she serves so well

    I tell you what I’m going to do
    Unlock the door and set the mood
    I’ll be back to nite to give you
    Round 2….
     
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    ^5 .. you go girl ...
    and when you finish
    with thee
    take him onto
    round 3
    shut, bolt and
    lock the door
    cuz when you
    finish with him
    he won't be
    yelling
    veritgo
    anymore!
     
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    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    god ****

    DAAAAMMMMMMNNNNN 4EVERLUV....

    now round two sounds such a novel notion
    your vertigo voodoo drives such emotion
    I waited by the door till half past two
    so when you slipped in I was ready for you
    I'll throw you up against the wall
    this pent up passion you cannot stall
    and the mood I set will be sure to speak
    as I plant my lips on neck and cheek
    the fire in my eyes will burn with passion
    with the air so full of tension
    drinking so heavily of your lips
    back raked by your fingertips
    pulling that tight shirt right from your body
    no bra? short skirt? god **** your naughty
    I'll carry you back into my bed
    while the dirty thoughts spin in your head
    my lips and tongue will trace your spine
    and the voodoo that I do will make you mine
    lets just toss that skirt over by your shirt
    panties too you little flirt
    as I move you around to find your bliss
    give it a little suction kiss
    so worked up now that your on fire
    I think it's time to take you higher
    I'll trace kisses from thigh to thigh
    and let out that sexy manly sigh
    backing up to see your body before me
    the curves that make me unspeakably horny
    out of control as I slide up inside
    holding on tight as we go for a ride
    and as your screams of passion flow
    you'll realize
    theres more then one way to get vertigo
     
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