Black Poetry : Verb's Haiku (as promised)

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Blak Man...
    heart and chi touched by your gifts
    gently kissing me
     
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    beautiful

    to touch heart and chi ~ your gifts.


    r
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Raheem.Zorbshun. thanks for the read & the love.
    now if the person it was actually written for would
    reply... we just myght be in business hea!! (lol) :):)
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's like right and very on point.
    -7
     
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    Smiling...

    I hear ya' GA ~ let the brotha respond...
    (f.y.i. - he's read it; he just needs to reply!!)
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seven. thanks for the read! & i agree 100%... :)

    N2. thanks for the FYI... (lol) but you know
    how it is when we do a peace for those who inspire
    us poetically... we want INSTANT feed-back! :)
     
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    said sooooo

    succinctly ~ sensuously ~ seriously!!!!

    sheer beauty,

    thank you Sunshyne lady!

    A
     
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    GA,

    Sorry for the delay in replying, sometimes I need to let a piece marinate in my mind before I respond. I am honored and feel blessed to have this written for me (I was only joking when I asked about mine). However, thank you queen. And you know you've got one coming.

    one love,blak
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms A. thank you! as always... your presence is a humbling experience!

    Verb. i know you were only kidding... thus the smiley face after your request. however i was only kidding some tyme ago when i asked you for something... & you did it for me! soooo... one good turn deserves anotha! & it was my honor to practice my Haiku on You! :) AlwaysLove~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY WELL SAID POETS
    FEELIN' DA MOTION
     
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