Black Poetry : VERBatim

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember precisely the feellings presented to me in the form of a gift wrapped milky blak heaven ...
    Word for word your actions began to pull heart strings
    allowing me to hum a different tune
    a kind of ventriloquis(him) from my soul
    that sliced through a thick layer of
    chocolate phrases until I reached YOU~

    The man I wanted so much to know
    because your vision, unblurred
    viewed my Amber Suns
    and you placed
    them into the palm of
    my hands to show me
    just what you see
    without optical illusions
    or shaded imagery

    Give me back those stolen moments
    when we first met
    and the love from within
    the Amber Suns that
    at one time had
    you
    'locked'~

    I recall each of your
    words, verbs, phrases and
    nouns that I have
    memorized and
    now, if I can only
    figure out where
    I put the 'key'...



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this peace is full of passion...a love reminisced...
    gyrl... find that key!!!!


    Much :heart: & Respect
     
  3. alyce

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    wooooooo LAWD!!!

    so sensuously beautiful....symbolism...so very key for eyes that go beyond 'seeing'.

    I feel this. It speaks volumes.

    flow, my sustuh!

    a
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri~

    And if I can't find it, I'm gon' have to get a spare made!! :D
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear ya' mami....

    and I think those keys are called foresight!!
     
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    See a good poet such as yourself can take my piece and make it look so much better. Tight work.

    one love,blak
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why thank you...

    Blak ~ you know I appreciate you & your responses.

    Thank ya' dearest :heart: