Black Poetry : Verbally Committed

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  1. Absolut

    Absolut Active Member MEMBER

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    Verbally Committed
    by Absolut

    Growin from a child to a man
    wonderin
    in this foreign land
    I
    stand blind like
    I'm
    reachin out for things i need to find
    in my hand
    conversation peace is outlined
    through
    everything for your love I'll do
    anytime
    If words touch I seek to find you
    we could be like
    Yellow & Blue....
    combined
    and I pray the green is mine

    I mean

    In your eyes
    all the beauty you remind
    me
    of sun-sets on the OPEN
    sea
    you Venus & Me
    Serene
    a match made so heavenly no others can serve
    40.... love
    for these words
    I Do
    testify words spoken
    to let those broken rectify
    what's past
    has me so glad I...
    know your touch...
    your love
    a rush I need so much
    More & MORE
    than lust I'm phemin' for
    just a meanin' or....
    reason
    for my state of being lonely
    only you have shown me what's true love from phony
    those who PLAY for Tony's
    Acting
    like they know me
    Imposters
    I see through these
    Fake Emmys & Oscars
    these...
    thespians wanna~Be Popsta's
    for General Hosp... then face Trauma
    as the World turns lesbian...'til
    feminines taste Drauma
    and Set it Off
    We Eminems let it off from
    baby mommas to
    escape the trap of bad Commas(comers)
    although I won't allow
    any negative period
    to cramp my style or
    hurt my child if I'm gone so
    PLease lord...
    drop me a line
    My life sentence can Run ~ on
    a Place to escape the devils' Gun on
    My Chest
    inks...pain...
    links...everything I represent...
    inside and can't vent
    My Tiger essence' spent
    years
    fighting this convalescent jungle
    and IF I EVER KNOW SUCCESS....
    these scars will keep me humble
    these bars
    keep me from some though I'm
    eternally ready to rumble
    zookeepers & Poachers
    who approach us
    trying to eat from our skin but
    I can't be managed or
    put on disPLAY for them
    I'll die in this Pen
    lyin face down
    tyin to defend
    my circle of life, wife & next of kin

    Feel me appear in the clouds when I reign thunderous
    new testament
    tears from the souls of those layin under us
    Best of Men
    like...
    Langston
    When the river flows through me
    A Negro speaks of
    My life & times through Blood & Rhymes
    to the WEB
    of
    peeps
    love keeps
    me
    Spiritually free
    eternally
    I'll be
    committed
    Verbally




    - vodka

    ~1~
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow...
     
  3. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolut this was extremely touching....
    I am soooo lovin the reality.......

    By the way, any reason in particular you kept capitalizing PLAY??? :x:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  4. Absolut

    Absolut Active Member MEMBER

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    LOL
    no...not really...

    although i do believe in the use of subliminals... lol

    thanks y'all.

    I haven't been around these parts in a while so I thought I'd swing through.
     
  5. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: I want more of you!!!! :hot:

    Was wondering where you dissapeared to! Hit us wit some more of your knowledge soon! Nice flow

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feel me appear in the clouds when I reign thunderous
    new testament
    tears from the souls of those layin under us

    WOW! Absolutely Phenominal, Angelic
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And you know, I will be looking out for more of you, cuz your flows seem to pleez my mentals...and I know the things you saying are true cuz I have thought these thoughts tooo...


    The Dreamer
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to the family :wave:
    wow..this is great
    loving this alot
    Peace
     
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