Black Poetry : verbally challenged

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  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...................
    as moiture envelops the vein
    in the right side of your neck
    and i inject love's nectar from my
    lips to yours/are u verbally challenged?
    fornication so good self-gratification
    cain't replace it
    expanding to the corners of your larynx
    but no words release from the reaction
    shaking your mental file cabinet with
    smooth vibrations,
    oscillations,
    meditaiton.
    aFEEL-e-ations with me make it
    hard to see that i care deeply for
    your conversation/ but the lust-makin
    gives me a mistaken identity
    when i slide in the culdisak of the
    warmest slopes ever given to me/are u verbally challenged?
    attacking your frame conquering this game
    of sin we dangerously play-destined
    to produce words from a muted soul when
    expressions fill my belly
    and satisfy my delight.....................
    .....................

    shhhhhhh
    ....................

    don't say a word. let your actions guide me thru the night.
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa!


    oooo-wee... GA-Boy!! i am lovin' this heah!

    ..tell da troof... is this your response to my
    Speechless piece?... 'cause even if it ain't...
    it would fit perfect-ly!! :D thanks for makin'
    MY monin'... :)

    :heart:
    GA-Gurl~
     
  3. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it may be the

    reply to your piece.
    but of course i won't say. gotta leave something
    for the subliminal to chew on.

    glad i made yo monin. now make my day!

    hw
     
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    excellent...tightly scribed here...

    a true read...

    one.
     
  5. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ipreeshate'cha

    D. thanx for ridin the hi-wa.
    i'm a big fan of your work.

    hw
     
  6. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx to all who read me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u express self so well i love da walk u take me on
    keep flowin as u do coz dis be tyght!
     
  8. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep walkin like a hitch hiker
    on the hi-wa
    and if u be patient i'll pick u
    up and we can journey togetha.

    thanx,
    hw
     
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    loved this piece...
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx be.
    preeshate the read.
    keep comin back
     
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