Quiet Poetry Lounge : Verbal Intercourse

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CarrieMonet, Mar 16, 2004.

  1. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you spoke and i listened

    i whispered and you grinned

    your voice beckoned me to the phone I dread

    but i didn't care

    i needed my mind stroked like only you can stroke it

    i told you a story and made your manhood rise

    we exchanged mental quickies about the possibilities but made no moves to go there

    i hear you speaking even when we are not in conversation

    your words echoing in my psyche

    just when i start missing the touch of your voice on my eardrum...you call

    my heart quickens and i feel enlightened

    sometimes my panties get moist from your poetic speech as i lay in the darkness enjoying, and sharing

    those moments

    no interuptions, no incoming calls, no please holds,

    just words caressing my soul

    i can only hope my voice and my words caress yours as well

    can i make love to your mind?

    can i stroke you now?

    will you let me give you angel kisses with my lyrics?

    can i seduce you mentally

    does my voice make you want me?

    good

    i'll talk to you later.

    ~CarrieMonet
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this vibe...
    peppery drop
    flow on....
    i can relate
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte flowin i see ya pen is on fire
    love it keep it flowin
     
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    I hear ya on this, sistah, what those words can do. Liked the flow of this.
     
  5. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bumping this up for someone.
     
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    "does my voice make you want me"?

    Yes!!!!

    I didn't see this before. Where did this come from. Very nice indeed Carrie.
    Mmmmmm

    "sometimes my panties get moist from your poetic speech as i lay in the darkness enjoying, and sharing":lips::lips::lips::lips::lips::lips::lips:
     
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    As Usher would say...."You've got it bad... :D"

    but we're all the better for it because from it...

    we are blessed with Awesome poetry....

    Sister...this was absolute Fiyah... :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
  8. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage
    Thank you so much!
     
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    Shoot, can I have his number? HJe got a brother? A cousin? Tight write sis!
     
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