Black Poetry : Verbal High

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verbal High

    I get high on verbal stigmatizations,
    Conscious thoughts and analytical situations.
    I fin for mental conceptions
    Filled with words full of
    Vital information
    Phrases that can somehow change
    A dying nation

    Yet we still contemplate over
    Vigorous thoughts of emptiness
    That some how control
    Our mental ways of thought
    Bull-**** causes with bull-**** effects.
    Yet, I wonder, and wonder, and wonder
    Why must we
    Endure this pain each day
    The pain of knowing
    That no matter what
    That our way of thinking
    Is killing our being.
    Political change and capital gain
    Filled with racial strain
    A hypocrisy know as democracy

    Yet, I still get high on verbal stigmatizations,
    Conscious thoughts and analytical situation
    And fining for mental conceptions
    Filled with words of vital information
    Searching for phrases that can some how
    Change our dying nation.

    Instead of up lifting
    We spend our time dismissing
    Dismissing the thought of humanity
    We rather talk down on each other
    And clown each other
    Instead of praising each other
    And thanking each other
    Has the thought of righteousness
    Leave us for a hierocracy
    Leaving us with fake *** liars
    And forgetting the high
    The high of a righteous life
    Yet I still plead
    Cause I want to believe

    That we still get high on verbal stigmatizations,
    Conscious thoughts and analytical situation
    And fining for mental conceptions
    Filled with words of vital information
    Searching for phrases that can some how
    Change our dying nation.

    Mannie
    Host and Poet of the Verbal High
    [URLwww.theverbalhigh.com="www.theverbalhigh.com"][/URL]
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i understood the message in this one and i say it was inspiring flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, you said that...and you said it well, yeah you did!!!
     
  4. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's a high worth reading and inhaling...wonderful piece poet...your message is deep
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Queen.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop poet , enjoyed the read here on a verbal wave.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got a "HIGH" off of ya written VERBAL, Poet...So its working...Keepin writing that realness...Peace...



    Drizz
     
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    speak it poet!

    Good words poet, I remain inspired! Keep it up, maybe someone will think about it for long enough and make that necessary change in there thought process from that imposed, internalized self-hatred to that of a positive self-conception. Thus returning to our natural (original) state of self-realization. Say on and live on, Pray on and give on!!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks all it really means a lot to me.
     
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