Black Poetry : Verbal Attacks

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nahshon, Jul 17, 2003.

  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sharper than
    Razors edge
    She knows well how to use it
    The tongue.
    Verbal abashment and harassment
    In front her one will inevitably become victim.
    Witticisms hurled with hurtful intentions
    She-devil silver tongued
    Slicing through mentals
    Like silver bullets through lycanthrope's flesh
    Like water through sieve
    Like knife to butter
    Birds to the wind
    Her only purpose to break you down,
    To read you write you and then erase you
    Because when it comes to her she feels
    Your just not worthy, and if she deems you that
    Than you might as well step out her presence…
    You may try to gain some respect by trying to lash back
    But she comes back Borg-like in her demeanor
    Resistance is futile---you too will be assimilated
    Unless you can match her wit for wit
    Blow for blow word for word
    But most likely your words wont even be heard
    Cause she's not listening to you…
    She only likes the sound of herself in attack mode


    Nahshon-Rae 7-16-2003
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Like silver bullets through lycanthrope's flesh" :) I like :)
    I've encountered a few...similar types :)
    tyte scribe
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i too have faced the lashing of such
    dis was awesome scribing bruh!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace Nashon, keep bringing the noise!
     
  5. angelicsage

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    Clever piece! Enjoyed...
     
  6. Bluewater

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    Hey Nahshon
    deep wounds
    of verbal
    display
    feeling this
    Peace
     
  7. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this...the visuals are on point...nice write poet
     
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