Black Poetry : Verbal 4 Play

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuse me love, but can I kiss you
    Were your legs combine,
    So I can taste the sweet fruit of your wine,
    Letting all the nectar of your twine
    Drip down on my mind.
    Teasing you all so slowly
    And blessing your inner womanhood
    With my thoughts

    Can I injected all of my nature
    Like you wish I could,
    Taunting your womb
    With not only my tongue
    But also my lips
    And as my fingers
    Began to venture
    Into the unknown,
    A sensual feeling occurred

    Can I stroke your mind?
    And put your womanhood at bliss
    Tantalizing all of your thoughts
    And messaging
    Every bit of your body
    From head to toe
    And pretend that
    We are not two but one.

    Can I, can I, can I enter you
    With my mind
    And relax every muscle
    That is combined in your sweet twine
    Pleasing you in so many different ways
    That only you could imagine
    What it would feel like
    To be touched by my pulsing soul.

    Can I religiously
    Dip my thoughts into your world
    Only to come to the conclusion
    That all of the masses
    Of my manhood
    Would be entering you
    Slowly making you have an explosion
    Which cause you to erupt
    Like Mt. Subious

    Can I caress your womanhood?
    With my deep affection
    Of your sweet innocent mind
    Only to be seduced
    By the passion that
    Keeps our bodies interlocked
    Like a key and chain
    Rescuing you by
    Placing my key into your lock

    Can I caress your breasts?
    And gently message
    The inside of your glory
    And as it began to drip
    And drip and drip
    Into my mouth
    My thirst is filled
    And quenched by your
    Bitter sweet lips

    Can I be that everlasting breath?
    That you take
    When you feel me
    Inside of you
    Gently letting out sounds of joy
    Which sound like?
    The smoothest melody
    That anyone has ever heard

    Can I be your last thought of the night?
    And that first thought of the day
    Whom only you know
    Will be able to please
    You in any
    And every single way

    Can I, can I, can I seduce you?
    With every bit
    Of my ever lasting thought
    Only to please every fantasy
    That you may have.
    Loving you like you love me
    Only to wonder
    If you can make me feel
    Like I did you?
    I wonder and wonder
    Can you?


    Don't just stop by and read leave a mark. Support all poets let them know how the poem made you feel. Trust they will appriciate it.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    steamy word 4 play she can't say no to dis here .....
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *exhale~inhale*
    gee whiz.....after faning, do allow me to say, this piece is awesome poet.
    I mean, I'm compelled to give you a "standing ovation" ...for the love (that intense) that a man can/willing and want to shower a Queen with...oh yeah, for that I :bowdown: ...to your King-ness
    big props for this poet, you got it going on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk about thoroughly satisfying a woman...wow...very artfully posed brotha. This was truly awesome.
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to the fam..

    You know I like your style,
    I mite just have to
    keep you to myself
    for awhile
    just a lil bit
    should tie me over
    not so fast baby move a lil slower
    it takes time to perfect
    the perfect wine
    with nectar so sweet,
    dripping down my legs..
    immersing my feet...
    :insane:

    That was a tite drop...
    awaiting ur nex flow.. :hearts4:
     
  6. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    wow very nice rhyme
     
  7. Mahoganee

    Mahoganee Active Member MEMBER

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    "Can I be your last thought of the night?
    And that first thought of the day..."

    Wow...that's deep.
    I had to read it again...
    Now if only I could get my man to perform such 4play :tongue: Anyway, nice piece!
     
  8. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your poem is fitting of your name
    The is most def some verbal 4 play!
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mannn this joint was on point........u slammed her n closed the deal
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow what can I say except thanks for all the love. I usually do consious pieces but I had to try a seductive one. Again thanks for the love
     
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