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  1. egyptianeyes

    egyptianeyes Active Member MEMBER

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    I sit here beside you,
    and I stare at our moon.
    Venus rising,
    first red, then white,
    Eyes looking upwards,
    Hand held tight.

    The night sounds,
    surround,
    The night love,
    abounds,
    I look into your face
    and I never want to leave,
    this place.

    All the games we played,
    are forgotten.
    The warmth of your hand
    summons me.
    Your voice,
    beckons me.
    Love struggles,
    to get free.

    My eyes are drawn upward,
    My heart is drawn forward,
    And I yearn for us,
    under the light of Venus.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this here was really beautiful
    as the place of venus glow
    awaits da hearts
    tyte scribe this was i enjoyed dis one
     
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    dis was nice, real nice
    thanz for sharin
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this. There is nothing like the night sky.
     
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    egyptianeyes Active Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhh mind, I see you have came for a visit...Welcome and enjoy... Egypt
     
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    Wow! Classically beautiful. Love the part about "our moon."
     
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