Black Poetry : Venus (Coltrane's Vibe)

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Venus - planet of passion
    play on girl play on

    venereal vibrations
    sensations
    gyrations
    as your rhythm moves me
    to your beat

    Venus
    controlled chaos
    shattering my former
    earthly existence
    to the extent
    that all i desire
    it for you to spin me
    off my axis

    Venus
    fill me with your beat
    replete
    i seek the crescendo
    to the next note
    of chaotic, erotic exchange
    2/4, 3/4, 4/4
    flips the beat
    my soul complete
    with you girl

    Venus - planet of passion
    play on girl play on

    dance a dance
    across my heart-strings
    play me girl
    play me girl
    play me girl
    pick me
    flick me
    make me by your hand

    i squeal in c sharp
    and you play me b flat
    and the rhythmic melody
    with vigorous vibrancy
    viciously
    you play
    and you invade my space
    continually
    most sensually
    and i am left
    exhausted
    love-spent
    as you rip
    shrill after shrill
    run from top to bottom
    and i am left
    exhausted
    love-spent
    as you play me
    as you please you

    please Venus
    play me again???


    (scribed in unison with John Coltrane's Venus)
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    ah snap!!!

    tight "classical" piece

    i'm diggin it

    :toast:

    one

    :)
     
  3. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thx pd
     
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    kl. coltrane would be Proud!!


    i have fallen in love... with this peace!!

    i've read it like 4 times in a row already...
    & all i can say each time is... "Dayum this
    is soooo extratyght!" i wanna put in my
    request rhat ni... to hear this one at the
    next SpokenLive! so don't even front when
    you come thru the door!! :lol:

    (i think imma go listen to some Coltrane!)

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
  5. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for sure my sista! thanks so much for your support.
     
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