Black Poetry : Venture To Say

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You and I have engaged
    in many conversations
    subtly interjected flirtatious remarks

    had moments where there was
    complete silence~ between us
    simultaneously we asked,
    "What are you thinking about?"
    neither one of us were honest
    responding with stuttered verbiage

    this Valentine's day
    I venture to say,
    I think it's high time
    you and I stop beating
    around that proverbial bush.

    I have been feeling your vibe
    for quite sometime
    the sexy smooth tone of
    your voice often made me moist
    & every time your eyes met with mine
    I ain't going to lie.... Yes,
    I thought about you between my thighs.

    I want you!

    would I be incorrect in assuming,
    you want me?

    I don't have a taste for
    chocolate candy in a
    red heart shape box
    I'm not longing to inhale
    the pleasant scent of a
    dozen long stem red roses.

    I want you! :wink:


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    ah snap!

    go head girlfriend

    tell 'em :lol:

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Dayummmmm!! COCO....... well i can't see him sayin' no
    if he do den Take me away i'm yours.....work dem keys sis..
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    madd sistahly Love

    PoeticD, Just playin the valentine thangy at a different angle. :D


    $Rich$, Don't be startin no mess. You know I want you! :kiss:


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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MMMMM licking my lips in anticipation....Loving this piece right here!!!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well go on head and tell it like it tis!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Giovanni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl!!!!!!!

    "I have been feeling your vibe
    for quite sometime
    the sexy smooth tone of
    your voice often made me moist
    & every time your eyes met with mine
    I ain't going to lie.... Yes,
    I thought about you between my thighs.

    I want you!

    would I be incorrect in assuming,
    you want me?

    I don't have a taste for
    chocolate candy in a
    red heart shape box
    I'm not longing to inhale
    the pleasant scent of a
    dozen long stem red roses.

    I want you! "

    you go' head and get yours
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've ventured....

    now let it be said...
    long stem roses are overrated
    and i hate it
    when "be my valentine" lines
    become the in thing
    what i mean is
    i'm turned on
    by a woman who knows what she wants
    and steps to me...correct
    your propers, babe
    that's what you get.

    i venture to say...you came correct.
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop, MMMMM I'm glad you loved my piece. :)

    Wildflower, Thanks for the read. :)

    Giovanni, I'm tryin. J/k. Thanks for the read. :)

    Baller, Baller, Baller! I love the way you holla [email protected] :)

    Shery, Thanks for the read & sistahly love. :)


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  10. OneTyme.

    OneTyme. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco!

    Sometimes It is just that simple!
    Love the flow!
    And Happy Valentine Poet!:)
     
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