Black Poetry : Ventstration I

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Aug 7, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to all you fake ***
    fronting faking fornicating with lies
    cheating on the truth...
    *******...all you
    back door begging smiling
    for approval porch *******...
    nose brown as **** not from
    birth but too busy tending to massuhs
    dyck...all you preaching in the pulpit
    plaigarizing passion for profit (false *** prophets)
    ...all you pistol packing
    scared of your reflection looking for the
    'real" you beneath dead bodies...*******
    ...stop hanging on the corners of your minds...*******...
    silly sisters swinging seman yearning hips
    for someones money sack...*******...how
    much does your soul cost? sistuhnigguh...
    beauty is only skin deep / seeps until it hits
    a rotted spirit and collects in between
    your thighs and metamorphosizes into
    a young *** mind man ******...
    what is freedom ******?
    what is freedom ******?
    what is freedom ******?
    Gold teeth or a collection plate of tainted tithes?
    fat *** checkbooks but crooked respect
    for melanin anointed government spies?
    peeping uncle tom on uncle sam's appendage?
    brain refusing the truth
    that "your sell out ***" really gets no admiration
    or browny points...bloody knee joints played
    for a tired soul giving to much head to miss libertease...
    all you ******* please...
    wake up from the come
    wake up from the coma
    wake up from the coma
    before your ignorance pulls the plug...

    ******.


    (c)2002 blakverb "ventstration"
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GIL SCOTT HERON STYLE!

    POWERFUL PIECE, STRONG AND TO THE POINT...YOU SAID WHAT NEEDED TO BE SAID ABOUT THE SAD STATE OF THE HUMAN CONDITION...THEMS THAT KNOW IT....FLOW IT!:peace: :peace:
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my dayum!
    Talk'n bout....
    tell it like it tis!


    Spitit! I's lis'nin.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  4. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    O-Kaaaaaaaaaaaay! ****

    blak...this is the ****!!!!!


    DAAAAAAAMN!!!! I was having thoughts on some of these same issues but wasn't able to lay the words creatively on paper...

    thanks for saving me...:D

    tight piece blak :toast:
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my royal BLaK-NeSs.


    well ****!! :)

    do you know how glad i am that i didn't
    mess around & miss this one?!!
    i'm ova here applaudin' & errythang...
    the passion used to express your view
    just permeates offa the page, myfriend!

    (i gotta hear this one!! ...please? :D )

    itsallLove, chile!!

    elayne.
     
  6. poeticdelight

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    this piece is off the chain :lol:

    pd
     
  7. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in total agreement with the PLAYground. you did this, Blak. take your bow, my brutha. you said this.

    Str8 PEACE.