Black Poetry : Venting Rapture

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Apr 18, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The things you do
    The things you say
    And whats bad….
    Is I have no place in ya life…
    Moving holding
    Doin that sweet thing you do
    Support and loving but
    ya feeding someon else
    So I been told in a round about way
    Actin like it don’t hurt
    But hell it burns…..
    Took me and wrap
    me in ya
    ................Bliss
    Electric fire blazin
    sound all
    ............smooth
    Got my head turning
    Dayum !!!!
    I am lost confused
    Mix up in the head
    Releasing pressure
    Tryin to feel a beat
    .........of just a piece of vibe
    You know the one
    As we use to set fire
    to what ever we touch
    Two of a kind
    Lovin in the same world
    But from different roads
    I guess you can say
    But heck do we have a chance to make
    It all right or do we fold and move on…
    Play it like a bad hand…
    and walk from the table
    Or do we lay the cards out again…….

    ok ok I got that out the way here comes the poem….

    listen as I speak to you
    the love in my heart….
    aches for you…..yearning
    deep
    salty tears run…….
    on river
    high
    I call u in my sleep
    I call u in my day dream
    I just want you
    You
    And more of you
    Feeling the vibe we have
    Just simple words
    I hear your call
    I feel your pain
    I feel your joy
    Some how….
    I know……
    As you invade my mind
    And caress my thoughts
    I know…
    That sweet smooth
    touch you got
    I know…
    As our bodies mold into one…
    And our hearts fold in truth
    as we mental twist
    lace and release
    It’s a way for us to be….
    tell me..you know as i do
    Tired of being torn apart…
    dayum
    dayum
    dayum!!!!!
    why you got to hurt me????
     
  2. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I often tell you all that I am feeling your words
    and I do mean that in a literal since. I can
    feel what you are meaning when I read this.
    I guess I put myself in the shoes of the author.
    With all that said. I love
    this.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know how you read some things and your eyes just wince cause you can feel it? Well that's how I felt with this, really. This was powerful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how one feel dis here
    the heart speaks openly
    da flow is like da river
    as the soul unfolds dis
    was well felt deeply
    very well done
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thatgirl
    thanks for the love
    and support you always show

    Rich well i guess i did my job ya know
    feeling the words not just reading
    is a hobbie of mine
    thanks for all the support and
    love you always give my work

    watzinaname..thanks for the takin time
    repling and showin support
     
  6. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQ, mmmmhhhmmmmmm, droping those flowes!!!!!! I like this one sista!!!!!!!!
     
  7. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok

    ^5 @ Turtle...sistah droppin um right...Nice floE's sis..most deff doin ya thang
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nita and turtle
    thanks yall
    for the love and support
    Peace
    Angel
     
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