Black Poetry : Venting Frustrations

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Venting Frustrations

    In here wear a bandana in a severe manner a clear planner
    For action, good Samaritans rule with authoritarian attitude banner
    Flies, street cold but in complete control like monkeys on bananas
    Peal junk, reveal funk; even steal lumps under pressure
    Need critical wisdom in this political system candidate’s treasure
    Like a simple actress need principle practice to become good
    Scum of Hollywood; ask Halle Berry the dumb not understood
    Have soft pride so cats stay off side violating and annihilating
    My religion creating precision sins, so I’m elevating and relocating
    Trying to duck these lying *****, look I spit mean script
    From between ships so there’s panic like a Titanic trip
    Across the ocean with a boss potion of sinking cream when
    My rhymes disperse, times worse today I scream for a friend
    Team with trend; try bringing a peaceful dream end
    Like pants my seam construction is worn
    Faces mean corruption and scorned
    Torn like rotten material picking cotton a miracle
    Right now, whiplash, script smash even my lips bashed
    Face ethical jerks and technical experts electrical alert the trash
    In my brain, lyrics heat with moisture now eat oysters from sea
    Official whack after initial contact with society a variety of debris
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do the windmills of that mind ever stop turning, Maddrapper? Packing a punch with those words as usual.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u drop it again on us felt all the inner depth of dis
    ya mind in da spin dis was deeply felt rock on brutha MADD
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname AND $$RICH$$ thanks for the props for real yall
     
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    upping for responses
     
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