Black Poetry : Ven`us Waters

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  1. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    Ven'us Water

    perhaps
    tampered, eloquent
    meadows seep…
    mocha arches
    on Saturn rings & green tea
    till orgasms I splash
    latte` notions
    inner-sprinkled peace
    our moon rotates around
    fleece and fetishes
    from a fountain so deep
    continue I to find your…
    milky floor sound sighs
    beneath a grinding cloud
    H
    I
    G
    H…
    catching buckets full
    honey oils and gesture
    unison pound
    bottom of tongue pail echoes
    gratified

    Jahvandus Kwu
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyght flow n'deed.....

    with a hint of a sensual ring...!!
    Keep the proses comin'!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DIZZZZAMMMMM!!!!! YA FLOWED DES ONE TO THE MAX
    LOVIN IT !! MORE ....MORE ........MOREEEEE!!!
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my only hope is that your thirst was quenched, is quenched and will continue to be quenched by this lovely spirit that has you on a whole new level. Jah I like this side of you. Like $$RICH$$ said.... MORE PLEASE

    One :heart:
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep, deep...

    ...and more deep. Incredibly thorough piece, scribe. *Feelin' this vibe, incessantly*...
     
  6. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love your work

    nuff said
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    in memory of ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    R.I.P..................Poet !
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *celebrates one of the greatest poets ever read* :toast:
     
  10. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sooooooooooooooooooooo
    H
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