Black Poetry : ~~~~~VELÁZQUEZ~~~~~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jun 15, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Describe Me.

    A priceless painting...
    perhaps a priceless VELÁZQUEZ
    that hinges on the exquisite,
    each brushstroke of color precise and
    sure.
    The hue's so complex and glowing.
    I live and breath,
    a priceless painting,
    a breathing work of art.
    No arrogance only God-like.
    My father, the Divine God,
    the Divine VELÁZQUEZ.

    I,
    Hanging beautifully here
    in Earth's museum.
    People gaze and are enraptured.
    This portrait of me,
    mirrors all of my triumphs, faults,
    insecurities and overcomings.
    It reflects my character;
    Integrity, strengths and weaknesses,
    my rights and my flaws,
    It reflects me.
    Beautiful in my joy as I am in my pain;
    a supreme actor,
    consummate leader,
    Striving Thinker,
    Ageless Poet,
    Nonconformist.
    My portrait,
    My reflection
    painted by the heavenly VELÁZQUEZ
    on an easel no longer used.
    Original,
    Eternal,
    Pure and Mellow,
    Breezy and Light.
    The portrait is me...
    A definitive work in progress.
    me...

    ~Copyright
    The year of the Monkey(2004).
    The 93rd year, 4th month, 28th day
    "Lady Yang's Jade" Publishing
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful work, I like the way you drove that in.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe
    laid nicely
    thanks for sharing
    ...Angel
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you ever read a poem where every single line was so metaphoric that it left you feeling like...WoW! Well I have. The name of the poem I'm referring to is VELAZQUEZ. You have got to read this poem. I mean WoW each line was so uniquely insightful that I could not even pull a "my favorite verse" from it. Now ain't dat sumthin! I believe the author is PropheticInsight or something like that :D Seriously though...

    Your Name Fits You Right! I Have Been Noticing That!


    Keep flowing chile...keep flowing like only you is doing up in heah!


    ~j​
     
  5. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your majesty, Thank you for your sheer beauty.
     
  6. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel, Thank you gal for your love. You are too beautiful.
     
  7. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now Mrs. Joyce,
    You got this black men here, just-a blushing up a storm! You sure do know how to make a man feel so very good! Thank you so much ma. You are a rare blessing and a literal miracle to many. Thank you is all I can say for fear of shedding tears. God bless Queen of the Haiku's :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was indeed a work of art on display. The creativity is flowing here.
     
  9. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much Watz. You are a blessing and I appreciate it greatly. God bless.
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see… a fellow “Lover of Art” is within our house…
    And suddenly I feel more at home than I ever have,
    It’s like being able to speak my native language…
    So you chose Valesquez…that says much
    Dark and Rich but telling, nonetheless

    You must know…I’ve been inspired again…*sigh & grins*
    Can’t explain the enchantment that flows through your work
    Just that it pulls new verse like the tide to the moon…
    But do consider it a compliment, I mean to take away nothing
    Only to bask in the radiance of your gift…

    Awe Inspired…. I chose… “Degas”…

    This piece, was as resplendent as the Artist himself…

    * Applause & Whistles *….Take a bow you phenomenal poet, you…