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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Nov 8, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Copyright ©2004 A~Sage
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    This is one of the better pieces I've read recently. I love this. It's so genuine
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the realms of this piece took my mental in a stage and vision
    awesome flow sis
     
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    Like an egotistical editor with a wand, before you knew it, poof you in essence were gone. I loved the theatrical touch you added to this, but was saddened by the thought of the self centered soul who held that wand. Please keep flowing poet.
     
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    had to revisit this one and still taken in by the sway ....wow !
     
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    Whoa, this is an amazing concept, my sister. Artfully conceived and skillfully laid down. Words can't express how much I respect your work.
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    awesome scribing...really felt this one...
    Peace
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    bumping this up...

    I love this!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree, this is off the hook.
     
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