Black Poetry : vanished

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  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    should known he said
    made it obvious
    but at every turn a
    lie
    making it hard to decipher truth from fiction
    making you seem kind
    making this life a dream
    you woke me up
    calling me ugly hateful names
    screaming you never loved me
    your right,
    i should known
    i should have known
    that you would be this way
    that the day to day chores
    the dutiful tasks and mindless
    hateful jobs
    led to ungrateful stares
    those little nicities gone
    pitter patter turned to
    little argues and
    then, gone
    vanished
     
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    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely written keep up the good work
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    speak on and welcome back home you been well missed poeticly
     
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    sometimes

    :qqb010:you think how did i allow myself to go thru that

    and then why was it a total waste of time

    looking back
     
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    Sister Randee :grouphug:
    first things first welcome back :wave:
    I thought maybe someone bumped an old piece of yours and I was thinking to myself "I dont recall reading this one from sister randee"
    now I know why :) its a new one!

    now...
    as I remember you never spare the truest of painstaking sorrows in your joints.
    They are emotionally invoking as I remember
    Hope to read more of you sister.
     
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    It can seem as though the changes happen over night but not so, little by little things change, and you wonder what went wrong. I feel this poetic release sis.
     
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    hmmm...

    ...and so it goes.

    the river of life.
     
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