Black Haiku : Vaniku Vankwish INTRO

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Here is a INTRO to a new vibe of poetry which i 'm delievering as da
    flying V vaniku vankwish or the term vanquish....to gain da mystery
    of it's place
    it's made up with a format of 5-4-3-2-1 style and gives
    a performance like the great Haikus do .

    It's a mixture of 15 syllables unryhme'd yet connected
    a Creation of my own i had copywritten da rights to
    as i seek new styles to present poetry poeticly u can enjoy
    what i hope can be a form of writting too poet's cross da world
    of expression and feelings may da ~V~ fly high !


    Divine soul of me

    I seek da heart
    beat of love
    untouch
    wave​

    Give me all of you
    your love is dear
    i need you
    closer
    now​
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now bro...this is the hotness and I'm looking forward to seeing many more pennings of your Vaniku by you and others...you shouldn't have intro'd this to a rising King of haiku and its derivatives LOL


    its clear that i lap
    against yo loins-
    bright days give
    birth to
    WE.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    May it be written , so it be done

    O' ye my buddy

    it's now a we
    all of us
    poetry
    fly

    May da kingship contiune to rise to haiku stardom
    as we master da art form between da lines of lyrics
    and the vibe of vanquish something i'm pushing hard
    and this new release of vaniku..Creation of da mind !

     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Give me all of you
    I'll give you me
    Together
    Let's take
    flight​

    I'm diggin this concept--vaniku/vankwish. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u watz hope u use it more to give it life !

    given love of me
    your to behold
    together
    we are
    one

    :kiss1:

    I'm happy u like da concept of this style i've created , hope to see u use it more to give it life thank u sweetie.
     
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    A brand new concept?
    Alive and born?
    brought to life
    Mind Grown?
    COOL!:cool:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sista Purplemoons

    Da concept alive
    mentally yes
    on hope of
    nu`wave
    fly
     
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    Jumping up and down!
    Pure genius flare.
    copy rights
    now in
    place
     
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    Finally my own

    stylish poetry
    have nu life
    proud of
    me


    your words touching my soft side thank u i am so happy after this long
    fight to get this and start it knowing i am da creator maybe one day i
    will be remebered by my creation . May da ~V~ fly high 4 yrs.
     
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    Heyyyyy ..why am I just now seeing this new creation? ...smh I'm just to slow for my own self. :nuts:
    let me take a crack at it ...here goes...

    My love is so deep
    can you feel it?
    inside of you
    say you
    do.
     
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