Black Haiku : VANIKU V Vankwish

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like da great Haiku of a Japanese style of poetry with a pattern of 17 on a
    5-7-5 format .

    here's a Nu~wave creation called da Flying ~V~ Vaniku vankwish style of
    poetry written in 15 on a 5-4-3-2-1 formatting style this one can't be done
    any other way but one style and way , it's being introduced to the world of
    poet's and was created by mental thoughts as da mind was flying in mid 2007
    Nu~wave Creation gave birth to this mix and it's more so from da adverse of
    english and culture bond spliced from da great well known Haiku
    as it leads into da third world it's also a form to express love and peace as
    victory ! and open da mystery .

    It's like abc's unrhymed yet connecting to kiss da next verse or line, now it
    can be done rhymatic with flair which is a nice way that will give a more free
    style base, the ~V~ of expression is now takening da poetic world by storm.

    Here is a maze of how it's created

    A-B-C-D-E
    D-C-B-A
    B-C-D
    C-B
    A

    As you notice the pattern top starts with (A to E) and end in (A)
    as it drops the vowl E become silent going backwards to reverse self
    forward and then backwards there are four twist in the maze .

    Here's a sample of the ~V~ Vaniku Vankwish or vanquish

    I held your hand tight
    bonding our love
    me and you
    dear-ly
    here​

    Can u find the hook and catch that mentally challenge u and let u know
    you have written a great piece , but not always do this pattern have to
    work to bring out the masterpiece of expression .

    Maze one ?
    Maze two ?
    Maze three ?
    Maze four ?
     
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    This formation is the sister of the great Japanese art form of Haiku poetry
    expressional writing known as the new wave flying ~V~ vaniku vankwish or
    vanquish which means (To gain mystery over ) in emotion, it will release stress
    and give a relaxation of comfort to the mind and soul of feelings of love and peace.

    The creation was mentally set and now flying through it's life of 2007 and today's
    time we see it written by some of the most talented poet's through Destee.com
    poetic forum, where it was created by $$RICH$$ a poet of the Destee.com family
    working to find the right nitch it was a long coming ~V~ through wild life and up-
    liftment to tame da mystery that plage da mind of stress for release and relaxation

    Vaniku : is a unrhymed verse with a beginning and ending likeness with five lines
    in 15 syllables expressing a version of poetry a poem in a v shape style called the
    flying ~v~ and sister to the Japanese art form .

    *A*..................... *E*
    ~v~................... ~v~
    ***~v~ ...........~v~***
    ******~v~.....~v~******
    ********* ~v~***********
    .............*A*.............
    It's now here in waves and catching on fast to the world of poetry writing and
    creation poeticly , one every poet should try to master and use in expression.

    Enjoy the new wave creation .
     
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    U got it and flying high on da ~V~ Thankz for checking this style out and giving it a try
     
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    This will come out smooth
    For no one else
    Feel me up
    Let's chat
    Love
     
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    No doubt in my mind
    da flava is pure
    I see you
    I'm here
    dear
     
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    Bro love to c you
    Sis is on this
    Our love last
    Through Out
    Time
     
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    Every space is a place
    shared a life time
    we are one
    rivered in
    grace
     
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    Grace will place & live
    With in for us
    To trace life
    Through souls
    Home
     
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    We are touched every day
    by the blessed gift
    given unto us
    that lasting
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    Amazing write! Swift, sharp and precise.
     
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