Black Poetry : Vancouver Sky

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VANCOUVER SKY
    ________________

    Moody wet and sullen
    Sky overcast
    Bulging dark clouds
    Wet to last

    When the sun comes
    It'll tax the moon
    Bumbershoot garden
    Vancouver gloom

    Noisy fat gulls
    Assail good air
    Otherworldly flight ~
    Birds on a dare

    Squeaky clean places
    Decorate the city
    Mysterious
    Drab people
    Make mosaic pretty

    Chinese
    Take out
    Where Asian is in
    Wed Indian curry
    To a Brit's chagrin

    Grits in the morning
    With Canadian bacon
    Vancouver Sky...
    A trip worth taking


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    nice poet. I think I take that trip
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smooth flow a trip cross da other side of da world
    keep flowin'
     
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    nice flow and very descriptive.
    enjoyed this piece, poet!
    Much love
     
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    Thank you for sharing your vision with love-

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