Black Poetry : Vampire of terror

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vampire of Terror

    He’s a Harvester of Terror
    He promoted himself to a new Job
    Of being a ruthless Crusader
    Claiming his orders from God,
    But his ancestry is a corporate mob

    Just like a cold hearted Vampire
    His wish to conquer many empires
    Walking on blood soaked red carpets
    Which he later mops into his mouth

    He’s filled with rageful eloquence
    Because he has two tongues
    His first tongue offers concealment
    Of the falsehood of his second tongue

    The Lamps of light no longer glow
    We breathe at the mercy of his blows
    The Olive oil evaporated, just burning skin & Bones
    All gates are locked, freedom is now gone
     
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    under da bite of da vamp !
    of night lights dem his tongue
    thrist for blood dis was heavy
    and deep u left something on my mind wit dis one
    flow on bruh i'm listening !
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i think i met him the other day...and you described him right down to his..his...his....tail...
    smokin...really smokin
     
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    AACoolDre-I'm keeping an extra stash of Holy water, steaks and sunlight, just in case. And your scribe has its own bite. Nicely crafted, HH
     
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    AACOOLDRE ... it's been a minute since i've read you ... wow ... someone came to mind when i read this and i can only wonder if it is the same person that inspired this peace ... but no matter, that's what great poetry does ... encourages the reader to think, put herself all in the mind of the poet ... great work! Thanks for sharing!

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    Can someone say, Donald Trump? Seriously, though your words brought to mind the image of a hideous creature....scary.
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all
    compliments act as fuel to keep me going
     
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    Hmm.. I wanna guess, cuz someone popped into to my head, but I could be wrong..... Good imagery.
     
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    Man you really put it all in this
    Coporate underminds
    Mob ties vampires suck us dry
    This was deep poet I loved it
     
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    That's right .
     
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