Black Poetry : VALLEY OF LOVE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Zen Master_1, Dec 5, 2003.

  1. Zen Master_1

    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such the view for me is so breathtaking with beauty.
    To witness, real life’s most luscious aspect brings tears.
    As the morning sun, christen its true wonders, of glory.
    Starry nights with or without the moon proves to be magical.
    Perfect background for sweet night flowers, to engage in love.
    Yes, let your pleasing aroma heighten the night skies as stars dance slowly.
    I the Zen Master of Love sit quietly in meditative venture, enjoy the far-reaching realms.
     
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    very nice....
    i dont know what to say..
    but nice i really like
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    zen this was awesome drop i hear every line
     
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    got me grooving on that scene...very nice
    Peace
     
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    what a peaceful read...:)
     
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    Title of manuscript

    mzblkangel, I do thank you at least I know this poetic suggestion will work for an upcoming book.

    $$RICH$$, Thanks I am working towards a wonderful goal, your insight said is all.

    Bluewater, Yes it is good to hear for that is the course for this suggestive piece to help those in the groove, thanks.

    triniti424, It is nice to know something so simple has that kind of effect, I do thank you for your heartfelt expression.
     
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    You've painted quite a serene scene.
     
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    keep bringing it man...
    one love
    khasm
     
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