Black Poetry : Valentines I don't know anymore...

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All day I have been wrestling with my emotions.
    Mixed they are but I know I feel devotion.

    Couldn’t I get the attention you placed on me today? Always?

    I like it, but I’m leery.
    Is it really here to stay?

    I bought into your rhetoric.
    I listened to your lines.
    I heard you say you’re sorry.
    So act like it some time.

    Valentine this heart of mine.
    Is wounded from the years.

    I cried inside and almost died.
    Giving in to you.

    I love you too.

    But I can no longer take the pain.
    You will treat me thin and leave me again.
    Until Valentines Day next year.

    No saloon swinging doors on my heart of course.
    But you act like you can come as you please.

    In a way I’m weak.
    When I hear you speak.
    All will and logic hits the floor.

    I have to walk away, find my true love another day.
    It won’t be with you I’m afraid.
    Anyway Happy Valentines Day.
    I just hope you didn’t show up for the tears.
     
  2. nevar

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    tears i show
    but when i see your face my eyes a glo

    when to see the satisfaction
    there wont be a subtraction

    or a takeway
    just to ask for your love to stay

    forever with me
    do you love thee

    like never before
    i need you and more

    to stay forever by my side
    as we do the electric side

    and show each other our different moves
    Hodee i like the way you groove
    your so smooth

    I too dont know about this Valentine thing
    but i offer my love forever I'll bring

    to you
    lets do

    what lovers come to do
    cause i wanna get next to you

    and in the end we wont say

    Valentines I don't know anymore!!!!!!!!!
    :flowers:
     
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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's so saaaaaaaaaaad.But i like it.
    Good reply nevar
     
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    Dam that was heart felt brother
    Deep emotinal ride-much love poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man Hodee i feel ya bruh fo real !
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    maybe this year things done change !
     
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    Hodee,

    a solemn flow for Valentines, but sometimes our happiness
    means....walking away.


    nicely done....


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    Yes a heartfelt piece...

    that sadly conveys the other side of Valentine's Day for many who may have lost a love or in between love.


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    Wow. When a loved one tries to make amends, a part of us wants to accept the "I'm sorry", but our hearts just can't take any more broken pieces. This was quite touching Hodee, such a well written scribe.
     
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    sometime i just don't know myself .....uppin it back
     
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