Black Poetry : valentine's day?? gotta think of something...

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l must have jumped ahead of myself today
    b/c l had given you...things
    and you know how l am
    expressions never dictated by seasons
    or time
    holidays or traditions but l'd go along...............

    *thinking*

    Maybe l could play her a song-
    a light classical of joy l have over her will interpret my depth
    and give her clarity like the breeze does for the day...
    and just maybe the breeze will blow "the big question" her way...

    you know what??
    l hope she knows that she is my rose
    and that she is my candy so l will be her vase...
    tonight l want her to taste- forever.
    peace.
    tranquility.

    and no this is not just a poetry.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a true love of heart
    yes sir man i know dis was a heart felt vibe
    not just poetry scribing !

    she feels as u do i'm sure
     
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    Nice piece.
     
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    oh this is really nice

    and I quote "l hope she knows that she is my rose
    and that she is my candy so l will be her vase... "

    digging that line man!!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$- no doubt :toast:

    Sista Steele- thanx.

    amberly- thanx. i have my eyes locked on your work queen...

    out.............
     
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    J'hiah,

    Excellent, excellent scribe fella!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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