Black Poetry : Valentine Scenario!!!

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright Poets!!! Today's Challenge.....Scribe a piece about your best or worst Valentine's Day!!!!! Let's Do This!!!
     
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    it was the day before valentine's day
    and i was not yet spoken for.
    as i walked up the stairs in the lobby of
    the dorm, the girl at the front desk stopped me
    "K, these are for you..."
    BEAUTIFUL pink, red, and white roses in
    a quaint vase... were for me
    could it be from sugar? or my daddy?
    i tore open the card and realized it was from him...
    not anyone i adored or cared to spend time with
    unattractive and arrogant and brash
    and he had figured that
    he could be my valentine...
    white for purity
    pink for friendship
    and red
    for luuuuuv...

    (oh hell no!)
    i picked up the heavy gift and pouted
    all the way to my dorm room,
    looked at the card again then threw it out
    got the bright idea to rip off all the petals
    and stick them in my classic coke bottle...
    so i did.
    my friends laughed and told me how wrong
    i was
    but i didn't care...
    i didn't care...
    eventually the petals mildewed and i threw
    them all away...
    i kept the vase.
    never said thank you.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Aiight!

    Tight flow wildflower!

    Ima give it a shot Bishop!

    Reas
     
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    remind me never to get on your bad side Wildflower....But can I send you some roses anyway.
     
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    Bring it on Reason...
     
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    you can definitely send me some roses Bishop!
    i wouldn't tear the petals off, i promise!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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