Black Poetry : Valentine Romance

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Feb 11, 2002.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sitting in the House of Lights overlooking Love’s Sea
    I saw her strolling along the seashore, not a care in the world.
    I noticed her glide, as if she was borne aloft on dove’s wings
    I knew then that she had to be mine.
    Immediately I shone the beacon of the Lighthouse upon her
    Transporting her into my world
    And there I noticed that in her eyes were flames of desire
    She reached out and touched my soul
    And kissed my spirit
    She told me that she belonged to me and I belonged to her
    We were one
    Never to part
    She is passion
    And I am Love
    From us came this day
    Of intimacy
    Of passion
    Of extasy
    When the hearts of lovers beat erratically
    That is the result of our lovemaking
    Once a year she comes to me
    Gliding over the waves of Love’s Sea
    So that we once again can become a union
    That lovers such as yourselves
    Can bask in the fulfillment of our pleasure
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Extremely da love bug

    of compassionate bliss along da seashore
    da kinda romance she will treasure in heart:heart: :love: :heart:
     
  3. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop...

    This is a very romantic piece
    thanks 4 sharing....


    Epiphany :heart:
     
  4. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich and epiphany for the read.....
     
  5. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay y'all in case you don't know...

    dnommo covers the meadow...
    j'hiah covers the garden..
    Rashad covers the brook...
    $$$RICH$$$ covers the sky...
    and bishop? well Bishop covers the sea, land sky and any other area that the lighthouse can shine his tight scribes on...

    poet this piece is beauty beyond compare...the sea is such a beautiful place...keep shingin your light bro' some of us truly need that direction...

    one
     
  6. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like it mayne..

    Bert
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo bishop
    you sure know how to
    set scene
    is the readers mind

    nice piece

    dssNY
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm

    betta than Oreo's :D




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