Black Poetry : valentine poem

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  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i do a mental rewind
    i can remember my valentine
    the day when you gave me
    my stuffed animal
    attached with a card
    because you wanted me
    to part my honey colored thighs
    hear me sigh
    get a piece of what was inside

    now i smile
    it’s been a while
    years have gone by
    i am by your side
    and parting these thighs
    is not your priority
    money is your sex
    you talk about stress
    i just want to be caressed
    by your dark brown hands
    hug me and hold me
    remind me of why i am with you

    but now i have to beg
    for a little of that physical attention
    sometimes it hurts too bad to mention
    and when you do
    you can’t hang with me
    you’re done by the count of three
    and i’m left feeling like i could scream
    satisfaction is just a dream

    now i lie next to you
    my lover has size C batteries
    a silver metal shaft
    a lover that can last
    and i receive a love challenge
    how do i write
    about undying love
    when i am dying to love you
    and want you to love me
    the way that you did
    on that snowy day
    when you came round my way
     
  2. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! This was great redlady. Having to resort to the good ol' batteries is hard!
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!!!!! now if you ever crave a you know a huh getaway...just walk towards the Light......
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    FIVE STARS

    this was very well-written

    :toast:

    the ladies are back again

    :)

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet very sweet
    ladies coming on strong guyz
    let's let dem feel some heat again
     
  6. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankee thankee -

    sista steele - it is what it is, u feeling me?
    kemet - i'll take that as a compliment, but i'm still not telling you how to get into the chat room! :lol:
    cindy - what's real is real ma! thanks.
    bishop - leave that light on for women everywhere
    poetic delight - you know we gotta step up to the plate
    rich - don't sleep on the ladies...we're right here
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Redlady my sister in the Spirit of the scribe and the vibe!

    I love you for keeping it real. I love that you (very much like me) say what you feel! This was by far one of the most gut wrenching doses of reality today...been there...doing my bit for Celibacy!
    And am not ashamed to say... the next brother coming my way, had better have more than a good job and a good pick up line!
    He better know about real love and 'NURTURING'!
    And believe this ole lady, love will come again...just trust and believe that God will supply "ALL" of your needs and everybody, but everybody needs LOVE!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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