Black Poetry : Valentine Manuscripts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Jan 22, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I kiss your lips I
    Look into the sky I
    Might find love I
    No not of other woman I
    Shed a single tear I
    Feel the depth of perception I
    Only know of one love I
    Know true love is your love I
    Can only handle the blessings I
    Can only feel your suppression I
    Get on bending knee I
    Feel the heat/feel seek/feel the beat I
    Think this is real love I
    Know valentines is here I
    Want this moment forever I
    Want this day forever I
    Know its more than just the 14th. I
    Pray for the night your here with me I
    Give you roses layered satin sheets I
    Spread the rose pedals for all too see I
    Feel the passion are you feeling me?? I
    Need the time the essence is so sweet I
    Play this song so all can hear I
    Know one in a million/one in a million I
    Will be right there/one in a million/
    one in a million I/Some times passion arises I
    Know that there sometimes compromises I
    Hold you close cause I cant loose you again I
    See my love in a different light
    Cause Aaliyah is always here.....
    I..I..I..I Have found my first true
    Moment to show you my
    Valentine Manuscript

    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this romantic scribe, looking forward to Aaliyah's flow back. Keep those flows coming.
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Sister Watz
    I am glad you liked this
    I try to explore different aspects of my mind
    Yes in this case love
    Much love Sister Watz
     
  4. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww... Tan... that was so sweet. I'm QQ'n for Sister Aaliyah's reply as well; quite the little collab team ya'll are. ****snaps, snapps****
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Sister Ifu
    I am glad you are feeling this
    Yes she is a special poet
    Much Love Sister
     
  6. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww.........

    This was very sweet....... I never expected this lol. Thank you so much for the love.


    AM
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and you say you dont know have the power to write about love cause people sometimes just dont make no sense. seems like to me you know about love even tho you try to be so hard. we know underneath it all lies a man who yearning for the right one to give you the love you need. flow on tant.:hearts3: :hearts4:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    this was awesome bruh
    i was like wow look at tantrum
    drop love passion & romance
     
  9. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THank You for the Love
    Sister Aaliyah & Nevar
    Brother $$RICH$$
    I thank you family
    Much Love
     
  10. Versatile

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    that was deep i would love to hear you perform it....
     
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