Black Poetry : Valentine Heart Of Mine!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Valentine heart of mine, always beating in two /two time.
    Me in yours and you in mine.
    Valentine is all the time , when the love is fresh in mind.
    Red hearts and roses, the day most people marry and
    many proposes...
    Valentine heart of mine, sublime you are my sunshine
    my cool lemonade on a hot day.
    My warmth on the coldest winter night!
    My Valentine heart of mine.
    Lets do it right...
    By candle light, all night , satin sheets and aphrodisiacs
    Keep me coming back and back
    Valentine heart of mine, always skipping a beat or two
    when I hear a word from you.
    It is but one day and that is not enough
    Like the shortest day of winter and the sun refuses to shine
    We leave the illusion of constant passion behind
    I declare and I swear that my man will feel special everyday
    that's just my way.
    Valentines day? You say?
    Valentine heart of mine, ever poetic so sweet , I make you
    diabetic...my sweet love nectar like insulin for your needs
    it feeds and it feeds and it brings you to that level
    safely we rest heads and hearts no longer beating out of
    time.
    Cause we are one my Valentine heart of mine!
    BJS (c) 2001
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: WE ARE NOT WORTHY!!! WE ARE NOT WORTHY!!!

    Poet you have penned this one well today. Your valentine is one lucky person

    no question

    one.
     
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    OOOOWEEEEE!!! I'm feelign this....Spread the love girl...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hot **** flow head sistah and sho ya true love
    in written scribe ........ummmmm ummmmm!!!!!!!
     
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    this was tyte flo on poet Happy Valentine Day!!!!!!!!!!:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin da heart of a love on Valentine
     
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    Beautiful flow. Your so sweet. Your gonna make him diabetic...

    Showing the love that makes him want more. Valentine Heart of mine.
     
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    This was beautiful
    I loved every word
    Much Love on this one poet
     
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    swinging it back in view wit love
     
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    tight flow...you penned this down very sweetly
     
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