Black Poetry : Valentine "Dream"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Baby:
    late at night
    while the world
    sleepin
    i stay awake thinking
    of you
    wishing upon dat star
    that somewhere
    in your heart you
    thinking of me too

    I'm dreammin
    of you tonight
    til tomorrow my love
    i'll be holding you
    tight
    there's no place
    i would want to be
    but here in my room
    thinking of you & me

    Smiling in our existance
    crossing orbs
    of your sweet essence
    knowning your here
    in my hearts embrace
    that kiss the beauty
    i ask that you
    forever be in my grasp
    to share,love & laugh

    I wonder if you see me
    will you know i'm real
    and to look in my eyez
    beyond hypnotize
    your see what's inside
    my humble queen valentine
    Dreammin
    to hold you close
    sho you the depth of me
    but all i have is
    this dreammin vision

    Late at night
    while the world
    sleepin
    i'm thinking of you
    trying to express
    my love for you
    dreammin endlessly
    tonight
    my sunshine
    valentine lover :blowkiss:
    :hearts2: :heart: :hearts1: :flowers: :hearts1: :heart: :hearts2: :ilu:
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh this valentine dream is so sweet flow on rich!!!!!!!!!
    my funny valentine!!!!!!!!
    :blowkiss: :blowkiss:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A dream
    too delicate to touch
    A dream
    that recurs so much
    Reel after reel
    frame after frame
    I hear you calling out
    watzinaname
    It's like a romantic movie
    a love flick
    The kind of moon, June, and
    spoon that makes me love sick
    Maybe one day this dream
    will actually become real
    And I'll embrace the poet inside
    while giving you something you can feel
    Until then, I guess I'll have to be
    satisfied with this dream every night
    featuring my Valentine poet
    loving me just right....
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u did it once again...loved this...
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dam that was hot
    I was really feeling that piece
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Nevar my heart calling
    wishing upon that star
    tonight i'll stay awake
    to fulfill her heart hoping
    she feel it too Thank u.Honey

    LovelyG. it's what i love
    to watch and give her all
    she can take to be happy
    inside this dream she smiled
    but i still have a vision ..wow
    Thank u my sweetie

    Thankz a million Tantrum
    man happy you could feel me on this
    one , that came from da heart.........

    Watz..........................
    Baby it real , what u feel
    from this dream dat instill
    holding calling cascading
    going deeper my valentine
    keeper my love cast upon
    ya heart tonight where our
    fire start on this romantic
    wave this dream can be
    realityand how i lone thee
    yes until i awaken feel me
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to my valentine rich....

    she feels it too

    hope to reveal too

    that the Valentine Dream is you
    :kiss1:
     
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    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have no words you know i dig your poetry
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    upon da morning light
    da dream in sight
    i'll be the one so right
    yes nevar tonight !!

    Thankz Versatile for the lovin support and warm words on this ..
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    B CAREFUL WHAT YOU ASK FOR CAUSE YOU JUST MIGHT GET IT. YOU HEARD ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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