Black Poetry : val(you)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Oct 20, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l have yet no mansion to give;
    but l would give you my last breath
    l can afford not yet diamonds or gold;
    all l have is my care- please wear- please hold...

    for l love you because of who you are

    l can not give the sun, moon, or star;
    l can give you a climax
    an experience way more far...
    a peace
    a joy
    a girl
    a boy please accept my heart's alloy

    l can give you God.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sir the most by far treasure u can give anyone
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    it's ok

    that is what will matter the most
    in a relationship in the long run

    money can't buy love no matter
    how much you have

    ask P DIDDY "he need a girl" :D

    one

    poeticd


    :toast:
     
  4. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVE IT

    i can give u god

    wow

    been away for a while but i always enjoyed reading
    your work and even when i'm not replying i'm reading
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx peeps.

    nfinite.....
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hia.... what more could a person ask for?




    One
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx Ubzorbshun..

    the heart is the most radiant among treasures iz da point...
     
  8. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hugedome.


    awww... i love you for who you are too! :D

    this was sweet lil bighead brother...
    you just been inspired late-ly ain'tcha?
    tell her... i ain't mad!! (hahaha)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.