Black Poetry : VAGINA CONFLICTS

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VAGINA CONFLICTS

    My walls are so beaten
    The stains of my soul forgot to train me
    Detained like white slavery
    Needing someone to blame

    I’m never alone
    Men are like algebraic numbers that tell time in free clinic time zones
    Body bags dragged on controversial TV shows
    Educated whores that know better then to get wetter for thugs without goals

    Turning the pages in my life
    Shaving my womb of emotional cries
    Legs are open to any man who’s willing to make me his for the night
    I abuse me
    My arms no longer reach for the compassion of love stories

    Lust schooled me
    I used to think I was a queen
    Until they took my throne

    I found myself alone
    Couples confuse me
    Misusing the elements of a broken heart beat

    I paint my face for their approval
    Skipped meals to fit their eyes of beauty
    Weak for their desires
    Losing track of me
    An unpaid prostitute desolated in a virgin’s dream
    They see me, a whore who looks for nothing more
    Than the exit to the back door of self confidence and self- esteem
    But in reality,
    They’re Afraid of competing with the man in me
     
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    Wow
    Im snap snap snap
    This is hot as hell
    I love the whole piece
    from top to bottom

    Quote-Turning the pages in my life
    Shaving my womb of emotional cries

    Reply-You on fire Sister Cursed
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you brother Tantrum:kiss1:
    Much love!:kiss1:
     
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    I'm dazed swirling the the emotions of amazement and sympathy. This is really good! I like the last line best b/c It was like the big finale to a fireworks show. Great piece!!!
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Tha-Emissary:kiss1:
    Much love:kiss1:
     
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    WOW...this was...this left me speechless...
    great write...
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you lovely:kiss1:
    Much love poet:kiss1:
     
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    cursed heart your good gurl keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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    :tweety: Thank you nevar girl much appreciated:tweety:
     
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    This piece was extremely AWESOME
    u just took it to new high ....wow!!
     
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