Black Haiku : Vacation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Mar 9, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Earth beneath the sky
    swaying movements of a breeze
    inebriates me

    Toes planted firmly
    in sand, challenging the waves --
    Comforts of the beach.




    N2urSoul
     
  2. Joyce

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    I saw all of this Ms. N and longed to be on the beach. Only it's raining tonight. I do love the sea very much. It has a way of pulling the most beautiful poetry out of one's soul.
     
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    Gurl, it's snowin' up heah where I am at!! :lol: How I wish it were only 'rain'.... its hazardous to drive in the snow with these folk up heah in Minnesota!! :D

    Thanks for the read sis'!!
     
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    now i feel ya here coz wow!! hell i be needing a snow car
    it can snow in chicago and i mean get cold !!! seeking da
    showers of drops
     
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    :D I overstand you $$RICH$$... it be's like dat in Minne"snow"ta too!! :lol:

    Thanx for the read!

    N2
     
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    say that...I feel this with all my senses, sis! wow!

    a
     
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    Glad you enjoyed sustah A :)

    N2
     
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    I LIIIIIIIIIIIIKES ...PUT ME ON THE BEACH...breeze ...clear blue sea... the whole nine...thanks !

    peace
    g-man
     
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