Black Poetry : Vacation on Spanish Lake

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    17,000 acres
    complete with supreme
    pristine wilderness;
    a wetland paradise
    Would you come with me?
    If you could -
    would you go somewhere
    different
    I am sure you would find
    you'd like the san/seren/tranquil/ity
    It would preserve your wildlife....
    they say the animals are in
    abundance there - a real
    exotic galleria
    let's leave at sunrise
    we'll arrive there by sunset
    in time to enjoy
    all of the beautiful
    earth enriched colors~
    So if you seek relaxation
    come away with me
    on my vacation
    where toghether we could
    watch the flocks of heron, egrets,
    and ibises
    as they fly high over giant
    cypress trees~
    and we'll listen to the hollowed
    sounds of nature as she
    washes over the basin...she's waving
    at us ~
    there we could sun tan on a log
    and talk more about...well, you know,-- you and me
    what do you think...down in the bayou
    on Spanish Lake just at the
    Mississippi Flyway
    I'm asking-- cause honey we need the reprieve
     
  2. GQ

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    Oh hell yeah N2....

    I'd go on a pleasurable reprieve with ya anytime!!!

    I think ya mental is a vacation for all of us up in here!!!

    Diggin' ya most def!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. alyce

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    THIS

    is what I'm talkin bout! I enjoyed your picturesque verse! Took me there...especially enjoy the way you make the language 'comply'!

    Write Poetess!

    A
     
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    a sweet getaway...

    as nature calls.

    i'm following the brush strokes
    as you paint a picture of pleasurable bliss
    YES,
    i'm liking this.

    peace
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    My :heart: ... oooohh, ya' know
    I'm there! Say "when"!!

    :lovestruc: SoulurN2~~
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce~

    Sissa-gurl...
    and ya' know sometimes it is
    very hard to get those words
    to work right -- it's almost
    like a struggle or fight - to
    make words fit in the way you
    want them too!!

    Then again girl, I know you know
    how it is too....

    Gracias Mami...!!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umm Hmm...hella right!!!

    WHEN!

    wHeN!!

    WhEn!!!

    when!!!!

    That enough??? :laugh:


    Peace
    GQ
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One Word - GQ~

    .......KRaaaZY!!
     
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    Now this scribe was
    Vacation!!

    I see Jamaica is not the only hot spot in town!! ;)

    *getaway*
     
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    I'd assume you'd know now...

    Ima fan! lol absolutely brilliant!!!

    Reas
     
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