Black Poetry : Vacancy

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    desolate and blank vast legions of open closed space

    endlessly going on enternally i live with an unequal equity

    But this partnership is not mutual im at the will of the black divine

    Subconsciously i worship an acient shrine

    God grants us the gift of life so when can i recieve mine?

    I'm grown but still feel like a newborn

    All alone crying dying....the truth revealed

    Oh so real on them coinagc turn to kodak nights

    Turning to substance for substance

    For im the walking unforseen my voice isn't even heard

    Absurd that im mute to the point where i have to type my words

    But anyway my being has been faultly constructed

    Support cast enlopes in their own blisfulness

    While im my own best man getting married to a toad

    Cold my feet froze my spirit on life support

    But optimism is the spirit even in a dying champion

    I hold onto the cliff hoping, praying for a scantion

    As my grip slips people who were present just to be witnesses are absent

    Common sense says these people dipped n If i live i can tell of this trip

    But i digress again everything has come to a peril

    I bear the weight of the past present n future on my shoulders

    N unable to decide on the path best to take

    For my advisors never thought mutually

    N thats all because my closest adversaries were my enemies

    Worst of being that Yaweh abandoned me

    all of that is in the mental all while being in the present

    Evident to me a lonely death is my present

    Parents absent and im the only "miracle" they had

    Isolated on the planet yes my life is quite sad

    God left me oh how im glad

    For he never did a thing to begin with

    elope enternally in nostaglia pain hurt n misery

    About my quest for love my desire to fill this vacancy
     
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    wow Mike this just captured me right in ...enjoyed the poetic splash !!!
     
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